Writing Goals

Creative Writing:

No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.

Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.



Monday, May 17, 2010

My weekend.

My weekend was pretty amazing.
To start off, I went to one of my friends michael mizia's house, and it was a blast we went on the trampoline, played games in the pool and went in his barn, where by the way he has four wheelers andd snow moblies. All the people there to start off were me, Joanie and Bianca. But then as the night went on Danielle, Amanda K and Chase R showed up. Amanda ended up haviung to leave so her mom picked her up and then it was me Danielle, Joanie, Bianca and Chase. But then one more person showed up Brad Nagel. IT was pretty amazing though because all Michael's beothers friends were therte to so it was like a party. Towards the second half of the night we watched the Hangover, one of my favorite movies, we made yummy popcorn in the popcorn machine adn we had ping pong tournaments. It was so fun, but it would have been so much more amazing if some other people that I had in mind came, but they didn't so it's okay it was still a pretty amazing night. Because then after I left michael's, me, Joanie and Bianca all went to Joanie's mom's house and sleptover. Then we woke up really early and Bianca had to go home, so we said bye adn then me and joanie tried to go back to sleep but that was a fail, and we couldn't so we just stayed up and took showers and got ready, and hungout. Then we went to the Waukesha Expo center for her mom's church thing. The car ride there was fun like always because we al;ways blast music and sing at the top of our lungs and yea it's pretty amazing. After the thing at the Waukesha Expo though we had another car ride whaich was once again amazing, to the pet store and there was this really cute puppy who looked like a little fur ball, and Joanie's mom was half tempted to buy it until we heard the price $620, for a dog! So we didn't buy the dog but while Joanie's sister, Michelle and her mom were playing with the dog, me and her explored the pet store. On our little adventure we saw fish, turtles, and a nasty tranchula spider that almost attacked us. Along with a visious bird that hissed at us when ever we came close to it. I don't know about you but i'm prettty sure cats hiss not birds. But after we had been totally freaked out by that, we were all hungry. So we went were cool people go to get food adn we went to the Dollar Tree, everything is one dollar. After we got done there we had a lot of stuff but it was all snacky stuff and we wanted some real food like a meal, so off to Taco Bell we went. Taco Bell was funny because, like always, Joanie's mom gets into deep conversation with the people ordering our food and becomes friends with them, it's pretty funny to watch. After Taco bell it was back to Joanie's Crib, I stayed for about an hour or two and then went home. Sadly I was supposed to go to a movie with her Raymond and Brooke. But I ended up not going. Then the best day of the whole weekend came up Sunday. First I woke up and I was really mad from not being able to doanytrhing the night before, I wa sbored to so there really isnt antything to do when your bored except go on facebook. So I went on facebook and then "he" was on one of the most amazing people I have ever met. We talked and talkes and eventually he was coming over and we were going to hang out. Yea that's waht I thought until my mom ruined everything and said no. But everything was all good becaue like 2 or 3 hours later i walked to Joanie's moms and then we walked downtown, and hung out with him, it was really awkward in the beggining becaue there were some poeple making it awkward. But at the end of the day everything was all good and everything turned out pretty amazing. BEfore I went to sleep I went on Facebook again, and talked to him again for like 2 or 3 hours. Then after that I went to sleep, knowing that nothing could ruin my day :)

Saturday, May 15, 2010

You ARE good enough.

Girls are like apples on trees.
The best one's are on the top of the tree.
The boy's don't want to reach for the good one
beacuse they're afraid of falling and getting hurt.
Instead they just go gor the rotten apples,
on the ground that aren't as good but, easy.
So the apples on top think there is something
wrong with them, when in reality they're amazing.
they just have to wait for the right boy to come along,
and be brave enough to climb all the way to the top of the tree.

i love you guys:)

You're my Honeybunch, Sugarplum
Pumpy-umpy-umpkin, You're my Sweetie Pie
You're my Cuppycake, Gumdrop
Snoogums-Boogums, You're the Apple of my Eye
And I love you so and I want you to know
That I'll always be right here
And I love to sing sweet songs to you
Because you are so dear


I love youu :)

Love.

What is love?

- Love is friendship on fire.
- love is when, he/she is the last thing you think about when you go to sleep and the first thing you think about when you wake up.
- Love is that feeling you get in your stomach when he/she comes around.
- Love is knowing that person, knowing all there problems, flaws, imperfections but excepting them and loving them anyway.
- Love is when you can tell them anything no matter what.
- Love is when you always want to be with them, and the moment they leave you miss them so much, and you can't ge them out of you mind.

TO BE CONTINUED

Friday, May 7, 2010

The last two days we have went on career days. IT was kind of boring sometimes because to be honest some of the tours just talk to much. But I would have to say my favorite parts were, going to UWM and then eating out where we wanted, and of course the bus ride. The bus ride was my favorite because I had an amazing group and an amazing person sitting by me. And let's face it the bus ride is like half of the trip and everyone loves it becaue they c na sit next to who they want and talk to who they want about what they want. I can't wait for six flags! It's going to be so amazing. We get to go on the bus ride which is everyone's favorite part and then we just run free until lunch, then we run free some more and then go home, it's going to be an awesome end to eigth grade year. Although I can't wait for summer, I think im going to miss some teachers here, but at least I can visit. I do have to admitt that the two years I have been in asa clark it has been truley amazing.