Life it’s an extraordinary thing.
Many of us are too worried about what
People with think or we limit ourselves because of other people.
Well my grandpa always used to say your never promised tomorrow.
So live your life to the fullest and don’t let anyone bring you down.
Follow your heart, and live, laugh love.
When the day comes to a close thank god,
That you got today and pray and ask him for tomorrow.
Because you are never promised tomorrow.
Life is like a shooting star it beautiful and glorious
It seems it will glow for all eternity but in an instant
It’s gone.
Writing Goals
Creative Writing:
No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.
Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.
No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.
Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.
Monday, February 22, 2010
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I like this poem a lot. I liked when you used your grandfather to tell part of the story. It seemed like he gave you inspiration to write this story. Also I like the shooting star, how people think the glow will last all eternity, but really it’ll be gone at some point. I didn’t see any spelling errors either. Great job on this whole thing. I really enjoyed it.
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