Writing Goals
Creative Writing:
No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.
Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.
No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.
Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.
Wednesday, June 9, 2010
Derrick Lopez R.I.P
Derrick although I was not your closest friend. I know we were still friends, I miss you a lot, it's not fair that you had to go, 90 year olds have strokes everyday and they live you were only 18 and you die. I don't understand why, dead or alive you are always in my heart, love you forever & always D-lo. Abby misses you to, I cried a lot the first day i heard you were gone forever but I think i'm still in that stage they call denial. But she isn't in denial anymore something clicked and she hasn't stopped crying sense. On facebook over 30 people including me wrote posts about you, so don't think you weren't loved becsue there are a lot of people who loved you. Abby's status said that you were the best big brother she could ever have, you weren't jsut a great brother you were a great friend and an overall great guy. We all love you and you will always be in our hearts. The one thing that gives me joy though is knowing that later in time we will all reunite and chill with jesus himself up in heaven, and have everything just perfect liek it used to be. Love you derrick have a nice sleep, your going to need it, to deal with me :)
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