Writing Goals

Creative Writing:

No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.

Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.



Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Thank you.

God I just wanted to thank you for my dad. Thank you for at least giving me one good parent that i know loves me, one that is there for me when he can be since he lives so far away. Thank you for giving me an azmazing boyfriend, well ex boyfriend that will hopefully be a boyfriend again soon. Thank you for my amazing friends that help me get through all the crap, and look on the bright side of situations. Thank you for everything good you've done for me, im very upset that i didn't get to go to six flags because of my mom, but maybe you gave me her so that I could turn out stronger. Well it's working and has worked, thank you for everything and even when i'm mad and i feel like you've given me a curse I jsut wanted to let you know that I am still greatful and I can't wait to see you in heaven, when the time comes.
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2 comments:

  1. BrianitzaJune 9, 2010 at 7:48 AM

    Taylor, this piece of writing is very deep and I like how you still thank God after all of the bad stuff that happens. Keep your head held high, and you'll get through anything! :)

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  2. Norman's thoughsJune 9, 2010 at 7:53 AM

    :) I know, you just have to stay strong but it sucks. And same goes for you missy! And if anyone gives you trouble you know i'm jsut a call away:)

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