Writing Goals
Creative Writing:
No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.
Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.
No 2 sentences in a paragraph begin with the same word.
Essay Writing:
1. Have a clear thesis
2. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence with example.
3. Don't repeat the same exact thing in the conclusion.
Tuesday, June 8, 2010
Why?
Grandma it's Taylor, I can't come visit you because we don't have enough money for plane tickets and you said no to a webcam because you don't want us to see you. Mom says you look really sick and your loosing a lot of weight, mom says your dieing and were pretty much just standing by and hoping for the best. We all know grandpa just died six months ago, and now you. Why grandma, Why do bad things have to happen to good people? Why can't I see you? I promise I won't laugh or make any funny faces and I won't try to cryin front of you, because I know that wouldn't help you. But grandma I just wish I could give you one last hug before you go, one last goodbye, one last smile, one last everything. Just so you know how much I love you and how much I will miss you when your gone. Stay strong grandma and fight through this if not for anyone for me, please grandma. I love you forever and always.
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Taylor, PLEASE send this to your grandmother! Write it in a card just so she knows how much you love her.
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